Spotlight

WHY CHOOSE WRITING FOUNDATION CLASSES?

Powerful, persuasive, and poignant, is how we all want our students' writing to be described. In order to get there we must start with the basics – even for high school. By doing so, this will lay a strong foundation for students to communicate their thoughts and ideas in a well organized composition. The Write Journey has developed a four-step process to help students achieve this goal. This four-step process has proven to be the foundation for excellent writing:

  •  STEP 1- Brainstorm to gather ideas

  •  STEP 2- Outline to organize ideas

  •  STEP 3- Write rough draft to create complete sentences

  • STEP 4- Rewrite to edit and improve sentences

With only four steps, this process is simple in its approach; however, like most important disciplines, to become consistent at producing high quality writing, mastery requires thorough instruction and regular practice with individual feedback. Our Writing Foundations classes consist of twelve weeks of instruction, group and individual practice, and personal feedback. Here at The Write Journey, we offer followup writing classes using quality literature to give students the opportunity to practice their writing using the four-step process, while adding additional information, and learning to change the structure of their sentences. Not only are the students improving their own writing, but they are at the same time studying how expert writers have composed their sentences and paragraphs to ultimately produce a quality book. Join us this fall to start your writing journey.

LEARNING ABOUT LIFE IN THE WOODS

Given a few parameters and some connections to the topic, creativity abounds within our students as they construct benchmark projects that show what they have learned throughout the semester.

While reading Sign of the Beaver, by Elizabeth George Speare, Silas ( TWJ Student) was intrigued by a 13 year old Matt who was left alone in the woods of Maine to survive and protect the cabin he and his Dad had just completed. Like Matt, Silas is an outdoor enthusiast, and he loves adventures of any kind. Therefore, Silas decided to build a cabin made from pretzel rods, ice cream cones and fondant. He did all the notching of the pretzel rods by himself with a Dremel tool. He also set up the garden behind the house using the detail of the corn, which Matt had to tend to daily in our story. Surprisingly, Silas recreated corn stalks using yellow Twizzlers! I found the most impressive aspect of this project to be Silas’s confidence in using the Dremel. In his video, Silas switches hands while using it and still makes the cut skillfully.

By creating and completing this project, Silas creatively practiced several skills:

  1. He had to think about the details given in the book regarding the cabin: What did it look

    like; how was it constructed; and what did the surrounding area include? With that

    knowledge, he then had to decide how it would work in real life.

  2. Problem solving several issues, which he described to us during his in class presentation,

    Silas revealed use of critical thinking skills. Not only did this project engage Silas with

    the literature, it also helped him develop real life skills.

This project helped Silas engage with the novel in ways we can not facilitate in class.

Creating connections from the text to real life, students learn new skills . . . just like Silas learned how to use a Dremel, and practice video creation to share his project with others. Enrichment Projects create fun ways for students to demonstrate what they have learned, providing opportunities for them to develop critical thinking, problem solving skills, and life experiences.

Click below to view Silas’ YouTube video showing his project: an entirely edible diorama of the setting of the story. Be sure to turn the volume up at the 2:38 timestamp to hear Silas talk about how he created the scene inspired by Sign of the Beaver written by Newberry medalist Elizabeth George Speare.

HAVE YOU EVER WONDERED WHAT AN ENRICHMENT PROJECT LOOKS LIKE?

Have you ever wondered what students might create for an Enrichment Project? Here is a writing assignment and video created by one of our students, Asher Bertholf! Asher was in 5th grade at the time, and had been in our classes for 2.5 years at the time of this project’s creation. You’ll notice that the written composition is not without some errors; that’s to be expected. However, he did a wonderful job on both portions. Be sure to read to the end and even click on the YouTube video to see this student’s visual/oral project!

Asher Bertholf
21 Balloons Enrichment Essay 3/22/2019

A Suspenseful Reaction
After reading the book, Twenty One Balloons, By William Pène du Bois, I innovated a chain reaction related to Professor Sherman’s adventure. A chain reaction is a sequence of reactions brought on by an initial movement. Will Professor Sherman’s ideas and choices allow him to escape the trap of Krakatoa?

I incorporated a metal screw in my chain reaction. Standing on a ladder, I got a huge screw-like pole and stuck it in the ground. My dad lent me a pole driver from his garage to pound the screw into the ground. Then, I got some twine tied it around the center of the screw and attached the end to the next object. I got a square metal plate with a hole in the middle and slid it down the screw. When it went down, it pulled the twine like a pulley system. That caused the next object to release. This replicates the Airy-Go-Round in the story. The Airy-Go-Round floated up the screw, high into the sky. In the story, it was seventy feet tall, whereas mine was seven feet tall.

The next apparatus in the chain reaction involved a balloon house. I made the balloon house with cardboard, Sharpies, a balloon, and paperclips. With my colored Sharpies I drew a magnificent house on cardboard and attached a blown balloon to the back using a clothes pin. I attached two paper clips to the top of the house which hung from a fishing line that stretched to the next object. When the twine got pulled from the metal plate, it tugged the house from the tree. The house slid smoothly down the fishing line. It triggered the next piece. This structure symbolized Professor Sherman floating over the ocean. He wafted smoothly until he reached a sudden stop. The future of the unknown looked uncertain.

The next station, the island of Krakatoa led to be treacherous. I built a replica of a volcano out of K’nex. Configuratively, I attached a track and car to it, made to fit the K’nex volcano. I set a cup followed by a ball at the end of the track. A small string held the car in place, so when the balloon house hit the vehicle, down the track it went. The car flew off the track. It hit a cup into the ball. This symbolized the volcano on Krakatoa. Like an electric chair racing around the volcano, the car flew. The car soared off the track just as the passengers in the electric chair were thrown out the window.

Subsequently, Dominos lined the next event. Carefully, I placed the Dominos in line. At the end of the line, the Dominos were set flat and built like a staircase. I lined the Dominos up the staircase. As the ball hit the first Domino, they all came falling down sequentially. Orderly, they fell from the bottom to the top of the staircase. The last Domino fell off the edge of the staircase onto the next object. This scene symbolized the houses on Krakatoa catastrophically crashing down one right after another. Sequentially, the houses kept falling down until the last one crashed. Professor Sherman’s telling of events collapsed.

The final stage of the chain reaction ended with the treacherous trap of Krakatoa. First, I got a mouse trap and hot glued a clothespin to the end. I set the trap. I attached a helium balloon to the mouth of the clothespin. When the last Domino fell, it landed on the trigger of the mousetrap. The trap snapped, crushing the clothespin, releasing the helium balloon. The balloon flew upwards. This relates to Professor Sherman narrowly escaping the the trap of the island.
To the second, he grabbed onto the balloon strings. He floated to safety.

Watching the chain reaction was the most fun of all. The ingenuity of my different ideas were attempted over a full week of building. Some plans I abandoned. Some I kept. I learned about friction, force, resistance, weight and angle. I liked combining all my subjects of school into one project: science, math, geography and literature.


We love to see our students dream up all kinds of amazing projects. Great job, Asher Bertholf!!

ENRICHMENT CLASSES 2022

In the last several weeks of the school year, students feel the tug of the change of seasons from dismal to pleasant weather. Spring fever hits, and the desire to enjoy the warm sunshine grows. However, we still want to make the most of our final weeks of classes. We designed our 2022 Enrichment Classes to help you finish the year with a flourish!

We offer classes for all ages and stages, most of which meet once weekly for five weeks. While our regular classes focus on formal academic writing and literature, our Enrichment Classes explore other types of writing, which allows students to find an adventure in a new writing pursuit.

Below you will find a list of our Enrichment Classes. If you would like more information on dates, times & cost ( charter funds accepted ) click the button below to head over to our class schedule!

Primary Level Students ( Grades TK-2)

  • Storytime Live

  • Nature Journaling

Elementary Level Students ( Grades 3-6)

  • Nature Journaling

  • Grammer Basics A

  • Creative Writing

  • Accelerated Writing Foundations

Intermediate Level Students ( Grades 7-8)

  • Grammer Basics B

  • Creative Writing

  • Novel Writing Workshop

  • Accelerated Writing Foundations

Advanced Level Students ( 9-12)

  • Grammer Basics B

  • Creative Writing

  • Novel Writing Workshop

  • Accelerated Writing Foundations

We are always available to walk you through any questions you may have regarding TWJ. Please feel free to contact us at the home office to answer any of your questions!











BASIC WRITING CLASSES: THE FOUNDATIONS

Often, the task of writing anything starts with the question, “What is the purpose of this writing assignment?” Many think of creative writing or story-telling. Some think of poetry or journaling. Still others think of research papers and long essays. However, in most instances, students must learn how to address writing prompts, identifying whether the prompt asks a question of the student or tells the student to write about a specific topic. Our Writing Foundations Classes help students learn to respond to writing prompts in all situations.

Formal academic writing requires students to consider the prompt, decide their ideas or perspective, and then write a number of sentences about that given prompt, or topic. In the FW classes, we teach students to break the assignment into manageable steps:

  •  Gather the ideas related to the prompt

  •  Decide which ideas to use in their writing, or composition

  •  Organize the ideas for flow

  •  Put the ideas into complete sentences

  •  Edit or correct the sentences for strength, correct grammar

    usage, and quality

  •  Produce a final composition that the student knows is strong

    because all the steps are addressed well

Time and again, The Write Journey hears comments from parents about the overwhelming expectations for their children when it comes to writing. They are expected to simply know how to write many words on any given topic. The expectation also demands that students find themselves naturally able to write because they read many books, or simply because they are older. These often misguided or unfair expectations may leave a student feeling as if they did something wrong, or as if they are not write enough to complete the task. We come against this methodology with our Writing Foundations Classes. Our goals aim to equip and empower the writer to address a writing assignment with specific skills to complete the task. The writer’s toolbox that we help students fill enables them to pull out the correct tool at the appropriate time.

Our focus for students is that they would gain mastery over the skills. This means that they need instruction, time, and practice. An athlete may begin with some natural abilities, but properly learning the fundamentals, plus hours of practice make a professional athlete stand out. The same is true with writing. A student may begin with some natural skills such as good ideas, eloquent phrases, and correct spelling. However, these are just parts of the whole. A student trained in the writer’s craft we teach will be able to pull all of their skills together to form a well written, well thought-out, skillful composition. It simply takes the proper instruction, time, and practice.

Writing Foundations Levels 1, 2 and 3: Our Basic Writing Level 1 class opens in the first week of each month. We encourage students to complete levels 1 and 2 (4 weeks/classes each) at the minimum. These first two levels instruct the student in the various tools needed for writing well. The third level allows the student to consistently practice the methods learned in levels 1 and 2. Students will receive robust feedback from the instructor, identifying and arming the student’s strengths, and challenging the student to improve their weaknesses.

Formal Academic Essay Writing is the High School Essay Writing course. This 12 week course helps high school students learn the various types of essays and compositions: personal reflective, descriptive, expository, persuasive, argumentative, response to informational text, and research projects. Students in this course learn the tools for composing much longer writing pieces without losing any of the skills needed to compose their compositions well. This course begins at the first week of each semester (January and August).

If your student needs help in the specific subject of writing, consider enrolling that student in the Writing Foundations courses. The link to our website is added for your convenience. You will find more information on the website about these classes, and the many other services we offer!

https://thewritejourney.net/basic-writing